ext_11511 ([identity profile] cpt-raina.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2005-07-29 10:41 pm (UTC)

Good characterization.

You missed a line in the poem though. The middle section goes:
...out the day.
With every delicious
sip...

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