. ([identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2003-07-03 02:21 pm (UTC)

Malfoy offers Harry a stone. “I’m touched,” Harry says, taking the blue-gray pebble and swallowing it. It slides down his throat like a rose petal and rests easily in his stomach.

Elegantly worded and simply beautiful. And the last line is just perfect.

Thank you, I'm honoured that you think so.
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