Gah! You suck. I mean, of course you don't suck, but I have to say that because you have lured me into this story and I know that someone's going to get hurt and I am going to cry and then my secretary is going to tell the copy guy I'm crying at work and they'll think I'm falling apart due to my recent breakup when in fact I'm falling apart because of Ryan's (or Jamie's?) broken heart, which, of course, I can't tell them about.
So, basically, I will blame you when the whole office starts predicting my breakdown. You and Jamie and adorable Seth, who may or may not be falling in lurve, and Ryan, who works too hard to see that his would-be boyfriend is cheating on him.
What? Feedback? Obviously, I dig your stuff big time. You give great Seth. I also really noticed in this one that you're good at scene-setting and description of environment and stuff like that. I'd elaborate but clearly I can't engage in gratuitous but therapeutic run-on sentences and bad grammar and then give intelligent feedback a few lines later. It's like a juxtaposition or something.
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So, basically, I will blame you when the whole office starts predicting my breakdown. You and Jamie and adorable Seth, who may or may not be falling in lurve, and Ryan, who works too hard to see that his would-be boyfriend is cheating on him.
What? Feedback? Obviously, I dig your stuff big time. You give great Seth. I also really noticed in this one that you're good at scene-setting and description of environment and stuff like that. I'd elaborate but clearly I can't engage in gratuitous but therapeutic run-on sentences and bad grammar and then give intelligent feedback a few lines later. It's like a juxtaposition or something.