First I don't watch Smallville (can't afford the cable bills) so all I know of Lex and the other characters is what you right. Second I LOVE this fic and it actually made me cry at the end, even though I'm not sure why, it just seemed so sad but a kind of uncaring sad-an acceptance of sadness.
Oops I went off, what I mean to say was that you ROCK as a writer, whatever you write. Oh and I really should think of getting a job to afford those cable bills.