ext_10086 ([identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2004-03-17 12:09 pm (UTC)

I'm at the point now where the very sight of your icon on my friends list sends me into palpitations!

Loved the first section and the "ghost" motif -- just a perfect set up.

Loved the stuff about Glasgow being his city ...

Loved this:

Even if his anger wasn’t apparent to everyone, it was apparent to him. Professionals couldn’t be seen glaring daggers or burning photographs over cheap candles though, so Billy carried on

The use of "professional" really made me think yes. That seemed so in character to me -- because "professional" would be the word Bill would use, would want to be. Not "celebrity" or even "actor". Professional. Very nice.

And the promise of two more fics! Huzzah!

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