ext_16606 ([identity profile] teaspoon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2004-11-02 09:55 am (UTC)

What I loved:
“What the fuck -- that was eight months ago!” Jamie shouted. “I hate you sometimes.”

Ian paused at the top of the stairs and turned back. “Yeah, I love you too.”


-Ian wearing all of Jamie's clothes.
-Seth! And Seth/Ryan.

“I’m not bringing you flowers.”

“I’m allergic.”

“Exactly.”

“Well then.”


-All those choppy little sentences and banter.
-The hot boyrubbing, because yum.


Quick grammar/spelling fix-its:
Ian was among the last students to leave the building in the four o’clock rush, noticeable by my lack of umbrella

“The girl with the stripped stockings and the nose ring”

Ian was too busy talking about all the school buildings thee were going to have to have sex from now on.


In closing:
I didn't know what this was when I started reading it, but I was easily drawn in and absolutely loved every minute of it. I will definitely have to check out the stuff before it, but this was just amazing.

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