Okay, now I have read it and I am envious of your Tim voice. He sounds like Tim. I particularly like the idea of Tim actively seeking Landry out and of them spending more and more time together after last week's episode (confimed by the deleted scenes!). The Matt/Landry dynamic falling apart is also very nicely done, the way Landry's pissed and hurt about things changing.

Also, I notice that Landry is sharing his pie with Riggins, which I take to mean that you took my words about "those who eat to together, sleep together" to heart.