ext_242936 ([identity profile] coralfly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2007-01-13 02:37 pm (UTC)

Tim and Landry are totally the new love (although the best thing about FNL is that it's a revolving door of love).

You have Tim down pat, I can just see him talking, interacting, moving, just being Tim in your story.

Add in Landry's woe and self-awareness and this is just goodness.

Also, I like how you've emphasized the parallels between Landry and Tim: so, so different and yet somewhere in between they are alike.

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