Damn, that was fantastic. I love the opening line - it's just so cool - and the way you feed it into the rest of the story. Very nicely done.
I LOVE that you bring up John talking to himself. That's one of my favorite character traits of McClane's and I think you wrote it fantastically. He's just so sarcastic and rambly.
Also - perfect job capturing that lassitude of being stoned. *Grins*
And the whole end of the fic? So hot... and so teasing. OMG.
In his head, Matt's looking at John like he's even better than that fancy new laptop Matt brought home last week, which is pretty impressive, because John's pretty sure that Matt's jerked off over that laptop, too. I giggled at this quite madly.
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I LOVE that you bring up John talking to himself. That's one of my favorite character traits of McClane's and I think you wrote it fantastically. He's just so sarcastic and rambly.
Also - perfect job capturing that lassitude of being stoned. *Grins*
And the whole end of the fic? So hot... and so teasing. OMG.
In his head, Matt's looking at John like he's even better than that fancy new laptop Matt brought home last week, which is pretty impressive, because John's pretty sure that Matt's jerked off over that laptop, too. I giggled at this quite madly.