http://cyclogenesis.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cyclogenesis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2002-10-11 10:24 pm (UTC)

That was great. Very interesting, watching Lex's progression, and very true to the character. I liked how it very subtle, that you weren't hitting us over the head with the Clex, but it was still there, and in a such a lovely way. Home. Awww.

...and what Lex desires is to turn the car around, go back to Luthor Corp and show his father how his left hook is coming along.

That's just a great line.

Or at least that’s what he thinks until Clark comes by with sugar cookies and hot chocolate and an oddly wrapped box that contains hand made coupons, one of which requires Lex to go ice skating.

Woobie! That is all.

Also, I really like how you structured this. Each closing sentence worked very well, and it set up a nice rhythm to the piece. Lovely as usual, my dear.


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