http://cyclogenesis.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cyclogenesis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2002-10-11 10:13 pm (UTC)

Interesting character piece. Quite well said, all of it. I really liked the bits describing where he'd been- the language was very effective. It flows quite well.

The ending, too, is great. It's the perfect conclusion, just a statement of fact. Nicely done.

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