hackthis_archive ([personal profile] hackthis_archive) wrote2009-03-26 10:03 am

GK - Traveling Soldier (comment!fic, Brad/Nate, Layla)

A too-long happy comment!fic for [livejournal.com profile] sparky77.

Generation Kill
Nate/Brad, Layla
620 Words

Traveling Soldier



Nate's had the week from hell. One of his political clients had a personal disaster (read: one coked up hooker too many), which Nate had to fly to Albany to oversee personally.

His plane was delayed on the way there, and he had to stay three extra days because of a fucking blizzard.

Layla cried on the phone because he wasn't there to read her Peter Rabbit; Brad was upset (in his silent, stoic, displeasure-radiating-out-of-all-pores way) because Layla was upset, and then on the way home, Nate got detoured via fucking Miami, and a two-day trip has now taken seven days.

Nate used to love travelling. He used to love going to new places, and now, all he really wants is to stay at home with his daughter and Brad.

He left the Corps so he could stop flying miles from home to rescue people from someone else's mess. There has to be a more efficient way to provide for his family.

He's assured of this.

He rubs his face, two days of stubble rough against his palm, and digs in his pocket for his keys as the taxi pulls away from the front of the house.

It's barely seven in the morning on a Thursday, but Nate's been awake since Tuesday and he isn't a Recon Marine anymore.

He's still digging for his keys when the door swings wide open. "You're late," Brad says with a wry grin.

Nate snorts. "Hi, honey, I'm home," he says, stepping inside and letting Brad take his carry-on.

Brad pauses with Nate's bag in his hand and raises an eyebrow.

Nate rolls his eyes. "What? Compared to Iraq, I can't smell that bad."

"Bloodshot eyes. Messy hair. A loosened tie. Are you sure you weren't in Vegas spending next month's mortgage payment?"

"Yes, I confess. I was in Vegas doing lines off of trannies' implants. I took Ray in your place."

"That's not even a little amusing."

Nate quirks an eyebrow as Brad sets Nate's bag down and takes his coat.

"Okay, maybe it is a little bit," Brad concedes, hanging up Nate's coat.

Nate smirks and leans in for a kiss, but Brad pulls away.

"What now?" Nate bitches.

"You have stubble."

"And?"

"There was no stubble in Iraq."

Nate blinks. "You have an issue with my stubble."

"Only if 'I need to fuck you now' is an --"

Whatever Brad's about to say is cut off by a high pitched squeal, and Nate smiles at Layla peeking around the corner from the living room.

"DADDY!"

Nate's grin threatens to split his face in half as Layla runs down the hall as fast as her 19 month-old legs will take her.

He gets down on one knee to catch her when she launches herself: red tee-shirt, afro puffs, diaper and all, at him. "Hi, sweetie," he says, giving her a huge hug.

Layla pulls back and wrinkles her nose. "No," she says, patting his face.

"You don't like the stubble, huh?" Nate asks.

Layla shakes her head, completely unimpressed. "No leaving. Leaving is bad."

Nate scoops Layla up. She has food on her shirt, but her hair is perfect. How very Brad.

"Okay, no more leaving," he promises, and she beams at him.

"Leaving made Daddy sad," she says solemnly, looking at Brad.

Nate blinks and looks at Brad, who is looking just past Nate's shoulder. "My leaving made Daddy sad?" he prompts.

Layla nods very deliberately and then flings her arms around Nate's neck. "I love you, Daddy," she says.

Nate holds her that much tighter, looking over her head at Brad, who's watching them very intently.

"I love you too," he says.

Brad graces Nate with a small smile and nods his head.

[identity profile] sparky77.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
LAYLA! I cannot be cranky in the face of Layla. That's cheating! Layla and stubble and domestic adorableness! And YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

And now I am totally smiling and inspired to write things other then emo angels and their boytoys.

[identity profile] missdunham.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWWWWHHHHH

THIS DESERVES A LOT OF CAPSLOCK!

She has food on her shirt, but her hair is perfect. How very Brad.


HAHA THIS MADE ME LAUGH!

Dude, Layla is the cutest things xD!!

[identity profile] dine.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm grinning so broadly just now. this is perfect - banter and Layla and it just feels good!

Nate rolls his eyes. "What? Compared to Iraq I can't smell that bad."

hee, I'm just finishing One Bullet Away, and this reminds me vividly of passages in that book!

[identity profile] farwing.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I am trying to restrain myself from grinning like a loon, because I am sitting at the reception desk and I think I'm supposed to look distantly cheerful and not insanely amused but...this is so wonderful!!!!
lazulus: (audrey)

[personal profile] lazulus 2009-03-26 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, bless! You big softy, you.

*hearts*
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[identity profile] logans-mom00.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
"designed to promote smiles and inappropriate noises"

Done and done! Thanks so much!!!
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Nate with stubble? UNF. Also, LAAAAAYLAAAA. :D
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[identity profile] transtempts.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWW.

Yes, this will cure any woes.

[identity profile] sarkastic.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww, this left me with a huge dopey grin on my face. =D

[identity profile] plumtastic.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay Layla! Yay stubble! Yay Brad and Nate! Yay for happy places that make trannie refs and curse a lot!

[identity profile] ex-trolleys.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, LAYLA. ♥♥♥ The last three lines are positively heart-melting!

[identity profile] bijoux.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Eee, anything in Layla-verse puts a grin on my face :)

Brad was upset (in his silent, stoic, displeasure-radiating-out-of-all-pores way)

What an apt description :)

"Yes, I confess. I was in Vegas doing lines off of trannies' implants. I took Ray in your place."

*snort*

And is the little girl in your icon supposed to be Layla? Because she is super cute and not at all how I was picturing her, for some reason, but it all fits now.

[identity profile] missdunham.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Is Layla your character or one of those characters that everyone uses for Brad/Nate?
What's her story. I'm kind of new and still working everything AU out xD

[identity profile] fly-meaway.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this is so terribly cute and precious. Like all the other stories you made with Layla are, really. I love your flow in this and the conversations in these are so good and just; this is beautiful :D

[identity profile] dragondie.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude, this- "She has food on her shirt, but her hair is perfect. How very Brad." Tee-Hee!
Also this- "Nate blinks and looks at Brad, who is looking just past Nate's shoulder. "My leaving made Daddy sad?" he prompts."- Ha, ratted out by the baby. Priceless!

[identity profile] iwwfw.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Nate smirks and leans in for a kiss, but Brad pulls away.

"What now?" Nate bitches.

"You have stubble."

"And?"

"There was no stubble in Iraq."


See if Layla 'verse were a movie, I would replay this scene a million times before continuing.

So earlier when you were asking about what is classic [livejournal.com profile] hackthis?

"Yes, I confess. I was in Vegas doing lines off of trannies' implants. I took Ray in your place."

"That's not even a little amusing."


It's amazing how expressive you make Brad with so little. His pissy-ness, mopiness because Nate was gone totally comes across, and then is confirmed out of the mouth of babes.

LOVE!

[identity profile] ruggerdavey.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwww. I just...this was so adorable and lovely.
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[identity profile] busarewski.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Yes of course Layla's hair is perfect!! =) Oh Brad, what else could he do when Nate was gone ? =) I love your Layla-verse SO much. And extra-yay for Nate's stubble.
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[identity profile] lunasky.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Aw!!! That just made me smile from ear to ear. :)
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[identity profile] alhazred.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
I managed to see the title of this and then my eyes just missed everything else. "Wait, it's named after that song? ogod depressing fic ogod probably character death ogod....... ... ...wait....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"

It's nice being a pessimist, I'm never disappointing, only pleasantly surprised.

[identity profile] mydocuments.livejournal.com 2009-03-27 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
Oh happy happy happy. I drove 600 miles today to come home to GK fic. (Although apparently my Brad and Layla were lost somewhere along the way. Le sigh.)

"Yes, I confess. I was in Vegas doing lines off of trannies' implants. I took Ray in your place." ::Snort:: Or actually, snort might not be the most appropriate sound, considering that line.

"Leaving made Daddy sad," she says solemnly, looking at Brad. Awwwwww. And Brad very pointedly looking the other way.

"I love you too," he says.

Brad graces Nate with a small smile and nods his head.
This fills me with so much love. Brad and Nate and Layla are simply the most wonderful family. ♥

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