I am so horrifically bad at leaving good feedback, but I just wanted to say that your dialogue gets me every single time. And also, you pretty much broke my heart and put it all back together again. Little things like Brad letting Lily paint his toenails red, and liking Rudy's coffee best, and. And. All the quiet longing and crossed wires and Brad being a stubborn bitch and Nate just waiting patiently for him to come back and wanting him to stay long enough to GIVE HIM A SET OF KEYS and knowing that it's worth it, and.

*sniffles in a corner*

AND RAY/WALT, OH MY GOD, I love you a little bit.