ext_66909 ([identity profile] noeon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hackthis_archive 2010-01-18 06:29 pm (UTC)

FANTASTIC! guh! My lucky day, scanning and finding more GK fic from you (I was so desperate, I *finally* started reading [livejournal.com profile] romanticalgirl.)

It's all great, but this -
"My son loves you," she repeats. "And you love him, but I swear if you ever put him through this again, I have a shovel and a .45 and know several Marines who will help me dispose of your corpse. Are we clear, Nathaniel?"

- this is genius. I also like the use of perspective and formatting. A lot.

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