This was just lovely. For an AU it was remarkably accurate. Loved your Eames, vunerable but still quite self assured, and A* for using the correct Brit terms, e.g Torch instead of Flashlight - I say this when you may be British yourself so apologies if you are, I haven't checked your user info!

I'm currently weeding out the good writers/ not my cup of tea writers and I'm glad to say you're in the former, mainly because you don't use bloody pet names in every sentance Eames utters, that's really getting my goat. Anyway, I digress, it was very good, I liked it a whole lot.