Suckage? Let me see, amazing detail... check, not boring... check, great language and flow... check, perfectionist writer... check. I know it's impossible for anyone to really love everything they write, but it doesn't diminish the reader's appreciation.

To me this is practically a OMC, I have no idea who this guy is, but I sense a certain cynicism and opportunistic sharpness. I can see why he might appeal as a match for Pete. I thought it was good.

Cool. :)