wahhhhh. i missed your hp, man. <333 and your h/d, especially >:D<
because, you know, you make them work even when they're not working, and you make them lovable even when they're all blunt and painful like rusty nails, and it's like, all fuzzy-pretty somehow (maybe just, it being humor, still), even when it's all about the unpretty.
i think it's that contrast-- pretty even though it's not-- that makes it really work for me. like, you talk about all these broken things in harry, and how it's all meaningless and trite-- but there's always that double layer there, because in how you say it, there's a rhythm and a cadence, and it's obvious there's a music to it, even if harry is completely oblivious (as usual). heh.
so i dunno, if it -is- truly different. because, i don't know if you have to write them in lurve, to write them-- passionate and greedy and desperate, and -yes-. it doesn't really change the dynamic, so much as portray it in its beginning, you know?
because after a certain point something would have to -break- or -change-, for them. i mean, harry thinks it will all just end as soon as push comes to shove, but in a fic that's set in the beginning (necessarily, i think), you just don't -know-, so that's all open to interpretation. the love would come later, if it came-- and this is definitely how it would be. *grins* at least, isn't this how one would -want- it to be? :D
These are better phrases to describe Harry’s feelings toward Malfoy, because yes, Harry has feelings for Malfoy. hee! i know, just a turn of phrase, but it's just so brilliant, the way you have so many of them, and they just make me squee because you're so good at nailing things. er. you know, in that verbal way >:D<
Harry would beg to differ, but without the begging. *snorts* see. there, again~:)
No, Harry does not have problems with humility. *snorts* love that line. that's an unusual portrayal of harry, but it's all good with me. harry needs some swagger, aww yeah >:D<
Reaching out, he fists Malfoy’s robes, and pulls him close. His lips brush against the lobe of Malfoy’s ear when he whispers. “Did I ask your opinion?”
aaaargh, with the HOTNESS!! gar. dom!harry, yes. more? *laughs*
and Harry fucks like it’s business wah. i love the way you just -say- things like... on the money. yah. you write like it's business >:D< *laughs* or something ><;;
But he doesn’t have to like him to take what he needs.
*melts*! (even if you didn't mean it that way, still! still! *silly grin*)
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and your h/d, especially >:D<
because, you know, you make them work even when they're not working, and you make them lovable even when they're all blunt and painful like rusty nails, and it's like, all fuzzy-pretty somehow (maybe just, it being humor, still), even when it's all about the unpretty.
i think it's that contrast-- pretty even though it's not-- that makes it really work for me. like, you talk about all these broken things in harry, and how it's all meaningless and trite-- but there's always that double layer there, because in how you say it, there's a rhythm and a cadence, and it's obvious there's a music to it, even if harry is completely oblivious (as usual). heh.
so i dunno, if it -is- truly different. because, i don't know if you have to write them in lurve, to write them-- passionate and greedy and desperate, and -yes-. it doesn't really change the dynamic, so much as portray it in its beginning, you know?
because after a certain point something would have to -break- or -change-, for them. i mean, harry thinks it will all just end as soon as push comes to shove, but in a fic that's set in the beginning (necessarily, i think), you just don't -know-, so that's all open to interpretation. the love would come later, if it came-- and this is definitely how it would be. *grins* at least, isn't this how one would -want- it to be? :D
These are better phrases to describe Harry’s feelings toward Malfoy, because yes, Harry has feelings for Malfoy.
hee!
i know, just a turn of phrase, but it's just so brilliant, the way you have so many of them, and they just make me squee because you're so good at nailing things. er. you know, in that verbal way >:D<
Harry would beg to differ, but without the begging.
*snorts* see. there, again~:)
No, Harry does not have problems with humility.
*snorts*
love that line. that's an unusual portrayal of harry, but it's all good with me. harry needs some swagger, aww yeah >:D<
Reaching out, he fists Malfoy’s robes, and pulls him close. His lips brush against the lobe of Malfoy’s ear when he whispers.
“Did I ask your opinion?”
aaaargh, with the HOTNESS!!
gar. dom!harry, yes. more? *laughs*
and Harry fucks like it’s business
wah. i love the way you just -say- things like... on the money. yah. you write like it's business >:D<
*laughs* or something ><;;
But he doesn’t have to like him to take what he needs.
*melts*!
(even if you didn't mean it that way, still! still! *silly grin*)