hackthis_archive ([personal profile] hackthis_archive) wrote2005-04-06 09:53 am

Trade - Chapter III

TRADE

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Chapter III





The car keys dug into the palm of Draco's hand as he waited outside Waterloo station, hovering near Blaise's BMW to make certain it didn't get towed for his extremely illegal parking job on Cornwall Road.

The London sky was the de rigueur immutable grey, and his tie whipped around in the strong wind underneath the overhang. He'd left the office in such a hurry he'd forgotten his jacket, and now he was freezing his arse off.

He was going to kill Julian.

He was going to stand about planning to kill his twin and then -– "Taxi?"

Draco spun around, lips pursed to cut someone off at the knees. Did he look like a fucking taxi driver? When he stopped he was pointy face to pointy face with his brother.

The Malfoy smirk was firmly etched in Julian's features, although his eyes were hidden by a pair of entirely-too-dark-for-London sunglasses; Draco took a long look at the black leather jacket and the slim cut black trousers before pronouncing his verdict. "You look fucking terrible."

This remark was then complemented by a sharp slap to the side of Julian's head, knocking his sunglasses askew. Julian removed the glasses and slipped them inside his jacket without any sort of comment, sarcastic or otherwise, which served to aggravate Draco even more.

"Where the fuck have you been!" A year's worth of tension splintered at the sight of his fraternal twin, and Draco, unable to keep a tight rein on his voice, found his words cracking. "Mother's at the end of her rag over you; I was reduced to hiring some incompetent fuckwits who couldn't tell me anything, and your sodding employers wouldn't tell me anything! How was I supposed to explain that you just fucking vanished one day?"

Julian rubbed the side of his head. "I missed you too."

'Don't talk to me right now," Draco commanded, yanking his brother into a brutal embrace. "If you say something about Queen and country, I might have to kill you."

"It's always good to be missed," Julian confided, his hold just as crushing as Draco's own.

"Next time, I'll go missing and then you can pine," Draco said, breaking free and using the remote to unlock Blaise's car before walking around to the driver's side.

"I don’t pine," Julian said disdainfully over the roof of the car. "I just kill people instead. It's very therapeutic; you should try it."

Draco rolled his eyes. "Don't tempt me."






The drive north to Primrose Hill from south London was not one of the more pleasant experiences Draco had ever had. He gripped the steering wheel with white knuckles, and more than once Julian had to remind him that there were other people on the road, to which he disdainfully replied that if they didn't see him coming it was their own fucking loss.

He repeatedly stripped the gearbox, crunching the gears and nearly mowing down several white-socked tourists on Kingsway. In short, the trip to pick up his brother and ferry him to their mother's home in north London exposed in glaring colours the real reason that Draco didn’t possess a car in London: he was a horribly aggressive driver. Cutting people off and running lights left, right and centre were the least of his offences.

He nearly caused three pile-ups at various roundabouts and shaved several flakes of paint off Blaise's car when he cut a lorry off on Woburn Place.

Julian didn't bat an eyelash the entire ride, which was wise on his part as Draco was in no mood for commentary from the passenger seat. It was only as Draco turned onto Euston Road that he began to loosen his death grip on the wheel. He didn't even notice the rather smug look on his twin's face until he stopped at a traffic light, strains of Radiohead wafting between them.

He looked once, twice, the third time Julian raised a slim eyebrow. "Yes, brother dearest?"

"Nothing."

Julian's eyebrow moved up fractionally. Draco knew that look. He gave it to people all the time. "Of course not," Julian said.

"You still look like shit," Draco said after a pause.

"I believe we've already covered that –- sadly the gaols in America don't come with fitness spas. I tried to keep my figure, but American food and I just don’t agree."

Draco could feel the corners of his mouth wanting to turn upwards, but he couldn't -– wouldn’t -- let them. He was having enough problems not breaking Blaise's steering wheel; all the anxiety he'd been storing up had bled all over the interior of the car.

"Stop fanning about like you've just done something exceptionally clever," he snapped as the light changed.

Julian licked his lower lip. "This from the man who announced to our entire year that he'd managed to slip into headmaster's office while he was at tea and superglue all his desk drawers shut?"

Draco blinked. Julian was sitting next to him, looking as calm as you please, while Draco was going out of his fucking mind with worry. Julian had been in gaol. In a fucking American gaol. Draco had seen Oz on Sky, and his brother, his younger brother, had been in one; apparently, no one had done anything to get him out.

It was not on at all.

Draco could feel his composure crumbling all around him. He kept expecting some dodgy Americans in raincoats to show up and take his brother away, again.

"Don't –- don't do that," he said quietly, letting go of the wheel and looking at his hands, clenched in fists that rested on his thighs.

"Sorry?" Julian leaned towards Draco, the smirk on his lips disappearing slightly.

"You -- you don’t get to do that!" Draco roared, rearing out of his seat, his fist catching Julian across his left cheekbone. Draco's adrenaline surged as the bones in his right hand howled in protest; the only thing that prevented him from climbing across the car was his safety belt.

Julian's blue eyes widened, and as he rubbed his jaw gingerly. "Point taken."

Draco, vibrating with anger, shouted over him. "You don't get to fucking disappear for a year, and then show up, happy as a fucking hooker, and get to act like everything is fucking all right! It is not all fucking right!"

It took a full minute for the pounding in Draco's ears to subside, and only then did he realise that car horns were blaring all around him. Sticking his sore hand out the window, Draco flipped the driver behind him the V, before shifting into first and taking off just as the light turned red again.

He felt much calmer as he turned onto Albany Street; and he focussed on getting to St Edmund Terrace in one piece, stealing only the occasional glance at Julian, sitting ramrod straight beside him.

"Feeling better now?" Julian asked as Draco pulled onto the street where their mother lived.

Draco said nothing as he parked the car, but instead of turning off the engine he unfastened his safety belt and turned to face Julian. The swelling was just beginning to start, and Draco flexed his hand experimentally, curling it back into a fist to hide the tremors. "It's not a matter of feeling better," he said perfunctorily.

"You want another go?" Draco pursed his lips when Julian offered his other cheek. "I assure you they do much worse to you in America."

Draco's stomach clenched violently, and he doubled over onto the gearshift, certain he was going to be sick in Blaise's car. His brother, the only person he loved more than his mother and Blaise, had been left to rot in America for a whole fucking year, and he hadn't even known.

He twitched at the feel of Julian's hand smoothing the hair on the back of his head. "If you're sick in Blaise's car, you realise you'll have to buy him a new one, don't you?"

Draco sat up fractionally. "What makes you think this is Blaise's car? It could be mine."

Julian met Draco's look with a full-on smirk. "Have you seen the way you drive?"

Draco bit back a grin of his own. Instead he sat up and rubbed his chest where it'd been pressed against the gearstick. "You took the train in –- you came from the continent, didn't you?"

Julian gave an elegant approximation of a shrug as he looked somewhere over Draco's left shoulder.

"You could've just flown in. I would've bought you a ticket –- mother would've rented you a fucking jet -– you didn't want to go through customs."

"Have you ever noticed how trying flying can be?" Julian asked vaguely. "Being cooped up in a tiny space with all those insufferable people?"

Draco lowered his voice to a very unpleasant hiss. "Do not change the subject –- what are you hiding from? And what is the fucking point in you working for fucking MI-6 if they leave you in a fucking American gaol for an entire year?"

Draco refused to blink when Julian finally met his eyes. "I did not ask to be sent up for a year," Julian's tone was acidic. "I did not ask for a lot of things -- however, like everything we do -– this is complicated."

"Of course it's fucking complicated," Draco retorted. "I can understand that -– but this year of nothing. This can't happen again, Julian, it just can't."

For the first time since he'd seen his brother, Julian actually looked tired. "Do you think I asked to go to gaol for a year? Do you think I enjoy the lying and the bloody paranoia and not seeing my family for fucking ages?! I didn't ask the CIA to kill the woman I loved. I didn't ask for this assignment, Draco –- it just. It happened."

Draco sighed and pinched his nose. The engine was still rumbling underneath him and he felt entirely too warm. "I would ask you why you don’t just leave, but--"

"People don't just leave the Secret Intelligence Service," Julian finished. "This is not like stacking shelves at Boots. I can't just turn up at Vauxhall Cross and say, 'No more elaborately constructed fake murder scenes! No more hits! No more covert operations! I fancy a respectable job; I'm off to work for the family escort service.'"

Julian's profession was a rather difficult subject at the best of times, but when viewed alongside the family business, the waters went from murky to downright opaque.

Years of not talking about what Julian did had created a protective barrier that didn't always help matters. "Is it all double-crossing and back-stabbing?" Draco asked.

Julian raised an eyebrow. "The clothing's not bad."

Draco returned his twin's tired smile. "I don't understand why they didn't extract you. I don't -– why couldn't we find you?"

"Because I was in America."

"Bullshit. That's complete and utter bullshit."

Julian fixed Draco with a wry grin. "Yes, well, that too, but remember, I was there as a guest of the CIA. I hardly think my employers would've wanted me to ruin their investment after all this time -- plus there was the matter of that name issue."

"What name issue? You think I don't know your name after twenty-five years of mother looking at me and calling me the wrong name?"

"While that is always entertaining, I meant that you were looking for the wrong name."

"I was not!" Draco said heatedly. "You think I don't know your name, Julian Adrian Malfoy?"

"Sark."

Draco blinked as Julian leaned back against the door. "What's a Sark?"

"My surname. Julian Sark is my name while undercover."

Draco rubbed his face. It was beginning to throb in the exact place where he'd punched Julian – sometimes he really hated the twin thing. "I couldn't find you because of a bunch of American bureaucracy and a fucking name change?" he asked, unable to keep his voice level.

Julian reached over and turned off the car. "You wouldn't believe what a name can hide – now can we get out of this bloody car so I can go use the toilet and see my mother?"

Draco reached out and rubbed Julian's hair into a staticy mess. "Not necessarily in that order I hope," he said.






The walk from Primrose Hill to Camden was a lovely, brisk affair that took 20-30 minutes on foot. This suited Draco fine since northwest London at three o'clock on a Thursday morning was incredibly peaceful -- if you didn't mind the fog, and the chill, and the occasional glare of headlamps in your face.

And if you hadn't walked halfway to Camden before realising that you had to return someone's car.

Draco had actually left his mother's home shortly before two in the morning, after an evening full of excellent champagne, very dry wit, and very little discussion of Julian's whereabouts.

Once Narcissa Malfoy had gotten over the shock of opening her front door and seeing her missing son, she had ushered both her boys into the sitting room, and called for Dobson, her faithful manservant, to arrange a feast fit for a king, or several kings.

After sending Julian upstairs to 'wash that filth from his body and his mouth,' Draco had watched his mother phone an entire infantry worth of personal services -- everyone from her hairdresser to her personal shopper at Harvey Nichols had been rung up to make certain Julian would be well looked after and well turned out.

When Narcissa Malfoy rang, people jumped, and house calls were made. Severus had even shown up shortly before dinner, looking as though missing Malfoys popped up all the time.

In between enjoying entirely too much Perrier-Jouët champagne and mocking his brother's post-gaol physique, Draco had been unable to have a moment alone with Severus to discuss certain details of Julian's return –- but there would be time for that in the morning. Julian would be there in the morning -– Draco had rung Kingsley and requested that he come round and keep an eye on 28 St Edmund's Terrace to make certain of that.

Draco had even authorised Kingsley to bring along his working partner, Mad-Eye Moody, as well. Draco would spare no expense to maintain his brother where he could keep an eye on him. The underlying unease hadn't left him in the most agreeable spirits, but Malfoys were nothing if not able to retain excellent facades.

Nevertheless, after several hours of laughing in the right place, and listening to Julian's various anecdotes about the ineptitude of the American Central Intelligence Agency, Draco was absolutely knackered and wanted to go home.

It was only once he'd promised his mother he would pop around for breakfast in the morning, and hugged his brother a minute too long, that Draco realised the last thing he wanted was to go home alone -– which had led him to Camden. Both times.

Camden at three in the morning had considerably more activity than Primrose Hill, and Draco found himself consciously watching people as he drove past to make certain no pissed teens suddenly fell under the wheels of Blaise's car.

The headlines on something like that would be horrific:

Pimps Up, Teens Down
Intoxicated, Escort-Service Running Twin Of Missing SIS Agent Runs Down Defenceless Teen in Beemer


Laughing to himself, Draco parked around the corner from Blaise's flat, locked the car doors, pocketed the keys, and then promptly forgot all about them as he wandered over to 250 Camden Road. He'd perhaps had a bit more champagne than was advisable, but he was a Malfoy and could obviously handle it.

The lights were out across the front of the building, but that didn't necessarily mean that Blaise was asleep. Still, Draco pushed the buzzer several times without any sort of response.

The idea that Blaise might not be at home had never crossed Draco's mind, even though he now began to realise it was a great possibility. Blaise was not the sort of man to go without company unless he wanted to, and Draco –- Draco didn't want to think about that. He'd known Blaise forever and had met enough of Blaise's dalliances and 'partners' to last him several lifetimes.

It wasn't the drinking with rock stars (Blur and Supergrass) or the dating of supermodels (Helena Christensen and Boyd Holbrook) that vexed Draco as much as being introduced to people Blaise was actually serious about. The Thom Yorke episode alone made Draco's palms itch; Blaise had no business with some wonky-eyed, pasty, short rock star. It didn't even matter that Thom Yorke was straight; Blaise had an unsettling effect on people's sexuality.

He probably could've made Jude Law come out the closet, if he really wanted to.

Shaking off such thoughts, Draco crouched down, hiccupped, and picked up several loose pebbles. Squaring off, he threw them one by one at the window of Blaise's bedroom, which, thankfully, overlooked the street. If he'd been throwing rocks at the kitchen, he might've had to do it all night.

He stopped when there was a sudden burst of light from an on-coming car, and he glanced over as a hatchback of some sort cruised by slowly. There was an occupant, who looked male, although one really couldn't tell these days, especially at night and after a case of exquisite champagne. It struck Draco that perhaps loitering about Camden by himself, somewhat pissed, wasn't the smartest thing he'd ever done. Camden was completely safe, he had no doubt about that, but Severus was worried about that murder issue –- and if anyone took him for trade...

The idea alone shocked him.

He wasn't fucking trade!

Scowling at the passing driver, Draco turned on his well-shod heel, and went back to throwing rocks at Blaise's window.

If Blaise didn't let him in immediately, and Draco was propositioned by some punter, Blaise would he bailing him out of gaol in the morning for GBH.

Draco was on his third handful of pebbles and beginning to grow extremely distraught, and progressively more unsteady, when there was curtain movement from Blaise's flat and the window slid up. "Let me in now," Draco hissed, stepping forward into the hedges.

A dark head leaned out, followed by a bare torso. Blaise had clearly been in bed, shirtless. Draco couldn't begin to understand why this made bits of him go hot -– well, that wasn't strictly true, but the truth wasn't the point.

Draco had seen Blaise naked –- several years ago now though, unfortunately, and apparently he'd filled out since then.

"Draco?" Blaise rubbed his eyes before peering down at Draco in confusion. "What the hell are you doing?" he asked, his breath escaping in white puffs.

Draco hadn't thought it that cold -– but he suspected that was down to the drink. "I," he started and then stopped. "I brought the car back. It's in one piece."

Blaise gave Draco a fuzzy smile, and Draco's knees went a bit weak. "If you'd broken it—-"

"I'd've bought you a new one," Draco interrupted, "I know."

Blaise rubbed his head. "It's a bit cold out here right now, was there something else?"

Draco blinked. "The keys -– I wanted to give you the keys."

"Right," Blaise said around a yawn.

"Right."

Blaise peered down at Draco and his mouth twisted into a sleepy smirk. "You're completely smashed aren't you?"

"I am not," Draco said hotly, stepping out of the hedges. "I'm -– I'm –- fuck. What am I doing again? Were you sleeping?"

"I don't know what you were doing, Draco; I doubt I want to know either, but I was sleeping. It's what people do at night," Blaise said pointedly. "Look, I'm freezing my arse off, are you coming up or what?"

Draco scowled. "I would if someone would bloody well let me in."

Draco could see Blaise's eye roll from the second floor of the building. "You've got the fucking keys, you idiot," Blaise said. "What were you planning on using them for? Decoration?"

"Fuck off, Zabini," Draco called, patting down his pockets for the keys; perhaps he was a bit more than pissed if he couldn't remember that he had them to start with.

Walking over to the door, he slipped a large brass key in the lock, only to find the door already unlocked. The brightly lit entryway hurt Draco's eyes as he took the stairs two at a time, all the while muttering to himself about safety hazards. By the time he'd reached Blaise's flat he had the right key and was just reaching for the lock when the door cracked open.

"We don't want any," Blaise said, peering through the opening.

For the first time in hours, Draco relaxed and found himself smirking without tension. "Of course you do," he said, leaning against the doorway as Blaise opened the door wider.

Blaise wore a pair of dark blue boxers and not much else, to the great interest of Draco's dick and various other parts of Draco's anatomy. Like his mouth, which felt a bit dry, and his hands, which thought groping Blaise sounded like a brilliant idea. The bastard even had elegant feet.

Draco then wondered about Harry Potter's feet -- and Harry's thighs, and his backside and his cock and everything Draco hadn't seen yet -– but Blaise wasn't Harry.

"So, really, what do I owe the honour of this night-time call?" Blaise said, pointedly ignoring Draco's staring. "I told Terry if he ever wound up in the papers again, being sacked would be the least of his worries."

Draco exhaled softly through his nose and felt his body slowly begin to unwind. He closed his eyes; he could feel the heat escaping from Blaise's flat as they tarried in the doorway. His skin prickled as he realised exactly just how cold it must've been outside.

"Draco... Draco... Draco?"

Draco leaned into the warmth of Blaise's hand on his forehead. "Are you all right? You smell like Moet Cuvee, and you're acting like, well, not you."

"Perrier-Jouët," Draco corrected hazily. "Also, the car."

"What about the car?" Blaise's hand left Draco's forehead, and Draco leaned forward blindly to follow its warmth until it was reapplied to his temple, brushing his hair aside. "Did you have an accident? Is anything broken -– fucking hell, are you broken? Did you drive here pissed? What the hell is going on?!"

Blaise's voice was sharp with panic, and Draco moved easily as Blaise patted various bits of him, ostensibly to check for blood and broken bits.

When Draco opened his eyes again, Blaise was close enough to snog. "Not me, I'm all right," Draco began again, grabbing Blaise's wrists to still his motions. "Julian. I took the car to get Julian."

Blaise froze; the shadows under his eyes standing out in dark contrast to the lurid florescent lighting from the hall. "Julian's home?"

Draco stood up straight and scrubbed at his face. "The wayward twin returns."

"Ah."

Draco raised an eyebrow when nothing further was forthcoming. "That's all you can say? 'Ah'?"

Blaise gave another elegant motion with his shoulders that Draco didn't think should be called a shrug. "He's home; there's no point in worrying about him right now. If you're falling down with exhaustion and champagne you won't be any good to anyone anyway; you need to sleep."

Draco nodded, even as Blaise turned around and walked back inside.

"You coming?" Blaise called out from the recesses of his flat.

Draco stepped inside and shut the door behind him.



--Chapter IV---


Author's Note:

Americans have the CIA for international matters and the FBI for national matters, the British have MI-5 (domestic, i.e. national security) and MI-6 Secret Intelligence Service (foreign). For a better idea of the umbrella of British intelligence read here or go here for more about MI-6. Also, GBH =Grievous bodily harm.


+ I suppose also, you'll be wanting to see these people: The Cast of Trade

Betas by [livejournal.com profile] ethrosdemon -- Footnote hater and lover of all things tattoo related; [livejournal.com profile] oxoniensis -- artiste extrordinare and all around smart biscuit, and [livejournal.com profile] serialkarma -- who has punk'd me by going MIA today. I see how it is – I know where you live and I'm holding your tape hostage!

Music provided by Thom Yorke and Co: Karma Police and Blackstar (acoustic)



+ Posted on a Wednesday for [livejournal.com profile] circe_tigana. You know this means you only get one chapter next week, right?

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, um, hi.

::sheepishly raises hand::

I may be in love with Blaise too. Just sayin', not like it's a huge surprise or anything.

I am SO HAPPY with this chapter, I can't even. My favourite thing ever is the angst ridden tension filled breaking of the tension utterly cathartic scene between two characters, and you handled it wonderfully between Julian and Draco. I feel certain I'm missing tons of stuff here re: his backstory (is it the real Alias backstory? was sark in prison and his love killed), but it doesn't matter. I know that Draco loves and needs his brother, and that's all that matters.

Blaise+Thom Yorke = OTP. And "heee" to Holbrook, whom we will later find out Blaise dated only because he wanted Draco and couldn't have him. ;)

[identity profile] ethrosdemon.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Blaise gets around. There's enough for everyone.

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[identity profile] queenofalostart.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
+ I suppose also, you'll be wanting to see these people: The Cast of Trade

*puts in order for Terry Boot*

I have absolutely no Alias love, but I enjoying this series muchly. Thankee!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I have absolutely no Alias love, but I enjoying this series muchly. Thankee!

That makes me very happy to hear, not that you have no Alias love, but that you feel you can enjoy the story without the Alias thing too. *makes whooping noises*

[identity profile] longsunday.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Blaise + Thom Yorke.

oh holy crap. i ... my brain has melted. i. um. yeah. ow. hot.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude, Blaise fancies Thom Yorke like most people fancy um, Jude Law and Clive Owen. Draco doesn't get it at all, but he just doesn't know cos Thom Yorke? Hot. Not in that classical sense, but in that 'I've got the sexiest voice ever, even if I've got a wonky eye, and you totally want in my trousers.' Uh, yeah. Like that. Damn, where's my Radiohead icon.

[identity profile] fivil.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Castings! Oh the pretty. Have to love that. Especially Gary Lightbody as Neville.

I really like Julian so far. Very intrigued about him and the overall continuation of this.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I heart Gary Lightbody tremendously, and it just seemed very fitting, because his earnestness reminds me of Neville a lot.
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[personal profile] soul_cake_duck 2005-04-06 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
More !!!
The bit with Draco and Julian in the car was just lovely.

On a side note, who is that you have as Blaise? I've seen him before in one of your icons, and I've been trying to find out who he is - but to no avail

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
The Blaise in my icon is a model by the name of, um, Noah Miller (?) I think that's his name; I blame [livejournal.com profile] kattiya really as she's the one who flaunted the D&G ad that started this entire mess.

[identity profile] velutlunas.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
*sighs and is cheerfully sucked into a new story*

I have to say, there is just something so delightful about the mental imagery of ridiculously sexy men with accents lounging around in superbly tailored clothing.

All I'd like? A hot redhead. Please. There are not enough hot redheads in this world, so I want them in fiction. *begs quietly and offers art if necessary*

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I have to say, there is just something so delightful about the mental imagery of ridiculously sexy men with accents lounging around in superbly tailored clothing.

This is a story of my favorite things: men, fashion, London, music, London, sex, London -- did I mention the London bit? Also, for you, I will try to locate a hot redhead. I too happen to have a lot of, err, admiration for hot redheads, but they seem to be thin on the ground unless they answer to the name Rupert Grint.

[identity profile] nifra-idril.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't even -- how do you do these things, Z? You're like, a magician. I don't even care about Draco or Sark let alone Blaise Zabini and now you've got me hooked on this. Really, I feel that you've probably done something unimaginably clever to the way your sentences are structured on the page that hypnotizes and makes a girl suddenly turn into a Trade craving monster. Soon we'll all be walking through the street like Zombies, eyes rolled back into the head and making gurgling noises as we bleat out "Traaaaaaaade". You're entirely too diabolical for words.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
What? You blaspheme with no Sark love? But -- but Nif, how? I mean everyone else is disposable, meaning Sydney and Vaughn, but not Spy Daddy or Crazy Uncle Arvin or Weiss or, yeah, but still, it's Sark and he's so pretty and bad and English. He's such a Malfoy. Bah, regardless, I have you hooked, so this is okay ;)

[identity profile] josephides.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Like. Two chapters. In a short period of time. *flails* And how can I be OTPing Draco/Zabini when I *should* be OTPing Draco/Harry... *whimper*

So far Harry and Draco had just snogged, which was strangely virginal, but exceedingly hot. If nothing else it was excellent for building up anticipation – but Blaise wasn't Harry.

... wah? When did they do this? OMG. You're not telling me it happened and WE DON'T GET TO READ IT?!? And I so did not miss it out because I've read the previous chapters once or eighteen times.

*cries*

Also: Boyd. Holbrook. *dies*

[identity profile] mereol.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I was thinking that too...I came back online after printing and reading ( I do this so I can read and read again and again ), wondering if my cut & paste had missed something.....

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[identity profile] pandarus.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I am loving this SO MUCH that I can't begin to tell you. I'm all happy place-ish. Damn. Am crushing madly on Blaise, and cheering for Blaise/Draco, Draco/Harry, Draco/Julian, and just about any other combination of anyone that you might care to try for. Damn it. This is just a delightful collision of two of my favourite fictional worlds, and it's laced with delicious details that set it authentically in a London I know and love.

I adore you. It's funny, it's sexy, it's deliciously well written, it's moving - damn. Go team!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Am crushing madly on Blaise, and cheering for Blaise/Draco, Draco/Harry, Draco/Julian, and just about any other combination of anyone that you might care to try for. Damn it. This is just a delightful collision of two of my favourite fictional worlds, and it's laced with delicious details that set it authentically in a London I know and love.

a) This is my love letter to London, so I figured I might as well be as indulgent as possible. b) I am so so so happy you're enjoying this considering all the joy your writing as brought to me and c) Yeah, Blaise has his own fanclub.

[identity profile] notworthy.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I finally got around to reading the first three chapters today, and I'm so glad I did. This is nothing short of brilliant, and a lot of that has to do wtih the little touches of detail. It's just great.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
You're very kind; I'm glad you're enjoying this so much.

[identity profile] snooboostoo.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I am really enjoying the idea of Sark and Draco as brothers.

This is so good.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
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[identity profile] mizbean.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this fic so much. That is all.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you :)

[identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Just... drooling over here. And snickering also. That is all.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Amusement and drooling. An interesting combination. I'm all for it :)

[identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I really hope they go inside and have hot, hot sexx0rz. Because they SO should. Because Blaise is Teh Hotness. And well, yeah. I am all "BLAISE! *melts*"
Blaise/Draco OTP! :D

And Blaise/Boyd?? HEEEE!!!! So amused! Plus, Blaise/Thom! Hahahaha! Love that!

I hope we find out why Theodore is so EXCLUSIVE! Very intriguing! Like why was he "practically climbing" across Neville's desk?!?! ;)

It took me long enough to figure out what cross-over this was, well, crossed with. I have just started, this season, to get addicted to Alias. So I know Julian is FROM there, I just have no real idea to his backstory and all. But I am intrigued! And this story is just so great! I'm glad I just started reading it this morning so I had 3 parts to read at once.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I really hope they go inside and have hot, hot sexx0rz. Because they SO should. Because Blaise is Teh Hotness. And well, yeah. I am all "BLAISE! *melts*"
Blaise/Draco OTP! :D


*dies laughing* It never ceases to amuse (and delight) me how much people love Blaise even though JKR has given him only marginally more attention than Theodore.

I have just started, this season, to get addicted to Alias. So I know Julian is FROM there, I just have no real idea to his backstory and all.

It's my goal to enhance the story with the crossover, but not make it so involved that you have to know Alias inside and out too.

[identity profile] blueandomlettes.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ok so the MAD PROPS start with using the Dolce & Gabbana ads as a cast photo (just inspired), roll right by the fact that Julian Sark = Julian Malfoy = Draco's Twin ( I think I came spontaneosly (sp) just reading that line- Might be TMI but still the truth), and come to a fabulous drop dead gorgeous and sexy very Sarkian ( my new word do you like it) halt at the fact that I love the way this story is unfolding. I love that Draco lurves Blaise but at the same time is kinda diggin his new thing with Harry ( on that topic can I just say that lately i've been getting deathly ill at the THOUGHT of Harry/Draco, but yours works, it definately works). Normally when I read a WIP I know where I want the story to end, it doesn't always go taht way of course and thats cool, but with this story I'm just happy its there. Its like the Rhinoceros and I'm that tiny little bird thats hitching a ride, and keeping things clean, well as clean as a rhino can be ( wow this analogy worked out better than expected :-p ). Ok well I'm done now, will go back to awaiting the next chapter with baited breath ( dont' ask how long ive been waiting for a good excuse to use that expression)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies laughing*

So, you're, uh, liking the series are you? That's lovely to hear -- seriously though, I'm so pleased that you're enjoying reading it so much, and that the X-over works for you. I've felt that Sark was a Malfoy for so long that I just had to make it happen, and now, well, I always say the best way to get the story you want is to write it yourself, so. Thank you for your lovely comments!

[identity profile] brune-bombshell.livejournal.com 2005-04-06 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that casting just brought this story to a whole new level. I've been seeing Hugh Dancy Burberry ads in all kinds of magazines... man oh man does he make a sexy Harry.
And make room on the Blaise Bandwagon cuz I am hopin' on.
So intrigued by Julian... can't wait for more!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Another one on the Blaise bandwagon. I think we may have to upgrade to a truck soon ;)

[identity profile] jonem.livejournal.com 2005-04-07 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Waterloo Station - I was there myself not two weeks ago.

And forget the Harry/Draco. Blaiissssssse, preciousssssss.....

(Also loving the fact that Julians initials are JAM)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I didn't even notice the initals thing, but that's just tremendously funny. Also I am all about the Blaise love, yis.
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[personal profile] aidenfire 2005-04-07 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Gah. This is so, so brilliant, yet again. I have massive amounts of love.

But, umm, is it going to hurt me if I don't think I'm familiar with the story this is crossed with (considering that I haven't figured it out yet, I either don't know it or I'm really slow. Actually, either is possible. Hmm.)?

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
But, umm, is it going to hurt me if I don't think I'm familiar with the story this is crossed with (considering that I haven't figured it out yet, I either don't know it or I'm really slow. Actually, either is possible. Hmm.)?

It's my hope that not knowing Alias won't be a disadvantage when you read this. I want the story to be enhanced if you know the x-over, but not a requirement.

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[identity profile] flrouk.livejournal.com 2005-04-07 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
Sark! Blaise! Blaise/Thom! Rawk!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
:)

[identity profile] murklins.livejournal.com 2005-04-07 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
Sometimes I forget just how hot boys are. And those boys of yours are HOT.

And the story's okay, too, I guess. Ha! No, I come for the fic, the pictures are just yummy icing on a very, very tasty cake.

This crossover is extremely cool and sharp. Julian is as collected and inscrutable as ever, while Draco is...not. I have to wonder what Blaise is thinking as he watches Draco try to not have all those traitorous thoughts. Just how transparent is he?

So much potential packed into three chapters! I can't wait to see where it all goes.

Oh, and I have to say that I adored the part in Chapter 2 where Draco dreams about sleeping with *Brad Pitt* and can't help wishing a bit that he was instead with Blaise.

P.S. I recently friended you; hope that's okay. Must keep up to speed on this WIP!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you're enjoying the series, thank you so much for commenting :)

[identity profile] lyredenfers.livejournal.com 2005-04-07 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*Loves* This whole fic renders me speechless. Teh Sark. Teh Draco and Blaise. Teh Neville. The all-round goodness.

Draco blinked as Julian leaned back against the door. "What's a Sark?"

*Dies*

*Comes back to life*

*Dies*

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, what exactly *is* a Sark? I wonder that myself sometimes, because clearly he's a Malfoy with a misspelled name.

(Anonymous) 2005-04-07 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never watched "Alias," but this Julian comes across as an intriguing character.

The scene with Draco and Julian in the car - Draco's sudden (shocking!) violence, his nausea, everything not said – just excellently done.

Nice ending, too. (Blaise has got to know what Draco's feeling.)

-- Cécile

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice ending, too. (Blaise has got to know what Draco's feeling.)

I think it's one thing to *think* you know what someone's feeling and something else entirely to act on it. After all, imagine if you were *wrong*? It would be devestating

[identity profile] literaryll.livejournal.com 2005-04-08 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Wow was still squeeing over the last chapter and bam there is a new one posted! :D

Loved the scenes between Draco and Julian - Draco getting all out of control - that's my Draco <3<3<3 - am intrigued by Julian - he's from Alias right? Have never seen that show but now I might have to - you're evil :D

Draco's driving LOL

Kinglsey and Moody making sure that Julian stays there - awwww how much do I adore protective Draco?! I guess he's being sort of controlling too so protective with slytherin twist lol - whatever - love it

"Did you have an accident? Is anything broken – fucking hell, are you broken? Did you drive here pissed? What the hell is going on?!" - awwww <3<3 plus Blaise and Boyd Holbrook LOL mmmmmm

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved the scenes between Draco and Julian - Draco getting all out of control - that's my Draco <3<3<3 - am intrigued by Julian - he's from Alias right? Have never seen that show but now I might have to - you're evil :D

I'm hoping that I've written the story in such a way that you don't have to know Alias canon to enjoy what is (and will be) happening in the story. I want it to be enhanced by that canon, but it shouldn't be mandatory.

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[identity profile] marumae.livejournal.com 2005-04-08 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
*shakes fist at the one chapter only next week line...but melts into puddle of goo with the awesomeness of this fic.*

Mm, am here through Circe of course and found myself enchanted by the first pararaghy alone in chapter one. I absolutely love this, usually AU fics in ANY fandom send me running into the hills but this has be absolutely enchanted. Excellence, hack darling. EXCELLENCE. *eagerly awaits more*

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
You are very, very kind. Thank you so much for all you kind words. I hope the story lives up to your hopes.

[identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com 2005-04-08 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
came here via [livejournal.com profile] pir8fancier, and am thoroughly glad i did. even though i swore, absolutely swore i would not start another wip. but this is too, too fabulous. and your writing? [*dies*]

thanks for sharing your ideas and talent with the rest of us. [*is grateful*]

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-04-12 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
came here via pir8fancier, and am thoroughly glad i did. even though i swore, absolutely swore i would not start another wip. but this is too, too fabulous. and your writing? [*dies*]

Well, if it makes you feel any better this isn't a Work-in-Progress as much as it's a Work-in-Posting.

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