hackthis_archive ([personal profile] hackthis_archive) wrote2005-12-06 01:16 pm

BBM RPS - Sacrificial Lambs (JG/HL)

Inspired by a few stills and Mr Ang Lee's dedication to the crack, err, craft.

Brokeback Mountain RPS
Jake Gyllenhaal/Heath Ledger, Ang Lee

Sacrificial Lambs






Take #1

Films are shot in reverse. Generally, whatever you see at the end of a film is what was shot first. Jake doesn't know why this is, it could be a budgetary thing, but it's probably to allow for fuckups and the like. Regardless, it's not Jake's place to question why things happen in the order they do; it's his part to question his character's motivation. Jake has read Annie Proulx's short story, so he knows his motivation. It's the 1960's American Mid-West. He's a sheep wrangler. He's in love. That's all the motivation anyone should ever need.

It doesn't matter if Jake's in love with Heath -- he's not –- and it doesn't matter that Heath's shorter than Jake is -– he is –- Jake just has to be in love for this scene. He just has to feel the yearning and understand the secrecy for this particular take.

Except the first time he and Heath grab each other, he pulls a muscle in his neck and lets out a yowl.

"Cut! Cut! Cut!" Ang shouts.



Take #2

Twenty minutes later, Jake's neck feels better, but the sun has gone behind some clouds, and Jake can feel the chill. His vest looks a lot thicker than it is, but he can't even imagine how cold Heath must be in his thin cotton shirt -– he's shuddering against Jake's chest. Heath doesn't grip at Jake as much as he curls around him, smelling like Marlboro Red cigarettes and coffee, and Jake can feel the tremours when Heath sneezes.

"Damnit," Ang snaps, "Cut! Lighting!"

Heath lifts his head and smirks at Jake in their recessed porch setting. "Mint?"



Take #4

They're running the scene and this might be it. Jake can feel it in his bones. He's on his mark; Heath's on his mark. The lines are flowing seamlessly. The lighting is good. Heath's back is against the wall; Jake has him pined there with his body. Heath's hands are freezing on his ears though, and Jake's hearing is kind of muffled. When Heath's eyes close, Jake leans forward -– and his footing slips. The only reason he doesn't end up eating the staircase is because Heath's holding him up.

"Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!" Ang howls. "Fucking cut!"



Take #5

There's something wrong with this scene, Jake can feel it. He's not quite on; Heath's distracted, and then Jake catches onto Heath's line of vision. Ah, Michelle is on set, and so much for being professional.

The kiss is dry and devoid of any passion or character. Jake could be kissing carpeting.

"Cut!" Ang shouts. "What the hell? You're supposed to be happy to see each other! You're in love! Love story, boys! Love! You know that thing that makes your heart beat faster and decreases your IQ by half? Christ!" he snaps waving them off. "Take five."



Take #6

Five is more like forty-five, but now, Heath's not with Jake anymore. He's saying the words and going through the motions, but he's just not there. Michelle's left the set, but Heath's focus isn't anywhere on the rickety stairs with Jake. Heath turns his head at the wrong moment and Jake ends up kissing his ear.

Jake can hear Ang's sigh. "Right. Cut. Again."



Takes #3, 7-9

Technical difficulties.



Take #10

Jake's lost it. He has no idea what the hell his "it" is –- Maggie calls it "Mr Ed" –- but whatever "it" is, "it" is lost. When he kisses Heath, it's lackluster, and Ang groans. Loudly.

"Look." Ang is moving from behind the camera. This is not good. Heath is shorter than Jake, and Ang is shorter than both of them, but he strides over with the determination of a small man who does very big things all the time.

Jake's not expecting it when Ang slides in between them, grabs Heath's face, and plants one on him. Hard. Apparently, Heath isn't expecting it either.

"You love this man," Ang tells Jake before looking between them impatiently. "You can't get enough of him, but you have to share him with this other woman. You're completely broken at the same time that you want more. This is desperation at its finest. Act like you're in love, boys. Do it now."

Ang nods his head, steps away, and Heath lets out an exhalation of disbelief.

"You love me?" Heath asks Jake with a smile; he's almost flippant. Jake inhales deeply, he feels a bit shaky. His hands are trembling, and he doesn't know why. Actually, he does, it's called belief; it's called acting. It's been missing for the last several takes.

Jake grabs Heath by the shoulders and shoves him back against the cold aluminum siding. When Heath opens his mouth to protest, Jake kisses him. He presses his mouth against Heath's lips, licking and biting, hoping to convey everything he thinks Jack Twist might be: hopeful, hurt, intelligent, lonely, depressed and defiant.

When he pulls back, finally, Heath's eyes are wide and glazed.

"That's what I'm talking about!" Ang shouts. "Kiss him like that!"



Take #11

Production difficulty.



Take #12

The sun is crossing the sky, and the wind is starting to blow in from the north. Alberta is many things, but more than anything else, it's cold and lonely. Jake misses Kirsten. And Maggie. He misses his friends. All he has is Heath, and all Heath wants is Michelle.

Heath jumps the gun on this take. Jake's just leaning in, and Heath's already there.

Jake's pretty sure that Ang yells, "Cut" but he can't tell because Heath's slammed him against the opposing wall, and his head is ringing. Plus, he can't breathe because Heath is sucking all the air out of his lungs. It's a good kiss, but it's all wrong for the film.

"Cut!" finally makes its way to Jake's rattled brain. "Nice idea, Heath," Ang says, "but that's not your role this time around."

Heath doesn't look at Jake when he lets go and wipes his mouth with the back of his hand. "Right," is all he says.



Take #13

Jake says his dialogue by rote. Heath responds. Their inflection isn't great. Jake thinks he's going to need voiceover work later. They meet somewhere in the middle, and then there are hands and lips, and they kiss, and there's no acting whatsoever.

It's not flawless. It's not perfect. It is all flaws and imperfection. Heath's holding on too tight, and Jake's fingers are tangling in Heath's hair. There are teeth, and tongues, and they slam against the wall too hard. Heath's going to hurt later. But. But their thighs press together, and Jake can feel Heath's body heat radiating through their clothes. Just for a moment he believes that they are in love, and then Ang says, "Cut!" and Jake gets this strange sense of vulnerability, like he's sacrificing something good for something that might not be better.


-end-

Larger copies of the still are available here, because really, can you see too much of this?
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[personal profile] bluemeridian 2005-12-06 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooohhh, wow, faaaabbuulous - loved it!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] serialkarma.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
"Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!" Ang howls. "Fucking cut!"

the image of Ang Lee swearing like a sailor is fucking priceless.

"That's what I'm talking about!" Ang shouts. "Kiss him like that."

Yes, Jake! Listen to the man!

so is this the first piece of official BBM RPS or what?

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I know Ang's all soft spoken and what have you, but shooting a film could try the patience of Mother Theresa ;)

so is this the first piece of official BBM RPS or what?

I know it's my first piece, but there's a whole comm [livejournal.com profile] wranglers that's been counting the days and shit.

[identity profile] babyofthegroup.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
More of *that* please. Hoo boy, yes.

This movie is going to tear me into a gazillion pieces.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This movie is going to tear me into a gazillion pieces.

I know! Isn't it exciting!
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[personal profile] celli 2005-12-06 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
wjoa.

(which is a typo, but who fucking cares? yow.)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Nnnnnnnnnnnngh.

"You love me?" he asks Jake with a smile; he's almost flippant. Jake inhales deeply, he feels a bit shaky. His hands are trembling and he doesn't know why.

Yeah. Um. Uh huh.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, my sentiments exactly!
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[identity profile] greenapricot.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
omph.

This hits the spot it does, the just right desparate clinging sort of spot, man.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad it worked!

[identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
It's a good kiss, but it's all wrong for the film.

"Cut!" Ang shouts eventually. "Nice idea, Heath," he says, "but that's not your role."

Heath doesn't look at Jake when he wipes his mouth with the back of his hand. "Right," is all he says.


I love this, I LOVE this! Wonderful! Just - it has that perfect feel to it; it feels the way the movie looks. YAY!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
It's all thanks to you that it was written at all, so thank *you* for putting up the stills.

[identity profile] fivil.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude. Yes. Even your Ang Lee characterization is neat. He sounds like a feisty dude, fuck! Heh.

But yeah. Love the subtlelty, what's acting, what isn't and the last line is killed me. Just. Yes.

[identity profile] fivil.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Er, *just killed me.

BBM RPS - so good it makes you typo!

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[identity profile] obsessedmuch.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
oh... dear... god...

More. MORE!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Soon, very soon, chicken. *soothes*
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[identity profile] mizbean.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved Ang Lee in this. Very nice.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ang is the man!

[identity profile] slightlywee.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
My god, thank you for those fucking stills. I am all aflutter. Also, Jake/Heath! I beg for more, at least to tide me over until the ninth. That was painful and funny and sweet and even though it is not one of the squee moments, this -- Jake could be kissing carpeting -- is my favorite line.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
The stills literally sent my brain into a tizzy, and I couldn't stop myself, not that I tried really hard or anything :)

[identity profile] thecomfychair.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)

Just for a moment he believes that they are in love, and then Ang says, "Cut!" and Jake gets this strange sense of vulnerability like he's sacrificing something good for something that might not be better.
ouch. and also, hot. Very nice work.

I need the movie to be here now. I can only read the story so many times before I go "visuals, damn it, I need visuals!"

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I know! I'm practically gagging for the visuals myself :)

[identity profile] versinae.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, this is great. I want to build little shrines to Ang for being fabulous. So much wonderful.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Ang the Fabulous!
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[identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa, nellie. :) Yummy.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
:)

[identity profile] park-hye-in.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man. Love it.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

this is NOT my story!

[identity profile] ethrosdemon.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
But that's ok. It's Jakey.

and decreases your IQ by half?

Only half? lol Oh, yeah, I feel ya, baby.

Can Jake kiss *me* like that? I would cheat on Lex for Jake.

"Cut!" finally makes its way to Jake's rattled brain. "Nice idea, Heath," And says, "but that's not your role this time around."

Heath doesn't look at Jake when lets go and wipes his mouth with the back of his hand. "Right," is all he says.


HELLS YEAH!

Jake gets this strange sense of vulnerability like he's sacrificing something good for something that might not be better.

ACTING!
BRILLIANT!

and so it goes. Poor Jake.

Re: this is NOT my story!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Can Jake kiss *me* like that? I would cheat on Lex for Jake.

*makes notes for later blackmail*

[identity profile] gravi-girl123.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Maaan that was awesome. I love me some Jack/Heath RPS, epescially when written by you. I went on my flist and saw this and practically squeed.

Take #13 was just gorgeous and painful, and this line broke me a little All he has is Heath, and all Heath wants it Michelle.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel like I've been waiting for this film to come out on the longer side of forever, you know?
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[identity profile] zoniduck.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah. That was nice. This might just be the very first BBM RPS. Nice job!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't think it's the first piece, I know [livejournal.com profile] wranglers has been around a while, but it's certianly *my* first piece.

[identity profile] askmehow.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
My excitement cannot be textually rendered! No, really. So much love.

"That's what I'm talking about!" Ang shouts. "Kiss him like that!"
What he said.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so pleased you liked it :)
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[identity profile] mskatej.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh MAN. That was so good. I can't wait for this film.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Neither can I!

[identity profile] riverlight.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, yes. I am in love with this movie and I haven't even seen it yet.

He strides over with the determination of a small man who does very big things all the time. That line in particular--cracked me right up. So great!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] elzed.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn. Suddenly you make me want to see this film - and I was in two minds about it (it's often all a moot point anyhow, seeing how fecking difficult it is to go to the cinema these days). But that - that was raw and powerful and just right in the way you dealt both with the acting, and with the wanting, too.

Just for a moment he believes that they are in love (and I can just see the actor falling for his own spiel, there).

And your structure, with the cuts, rocked.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so pleased you liked it, and should you see the film, I hope you enjoy it!

[identity profile] cucumberstar.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Waaaaa! *flails*

I'm in love with you. I'm going to treasure this fic forever... or until I can see the damn movie!!! :P

I love that Ang bitches about love decreasing IQ's... awesome wording.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
:) I'm so pleased you enjoyed it so much!

[identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
NICE. I'm actually also writing Jake RPS right now, in commemoration of the reviews I've already read for the film. I've read the story too, and everything I've heard about the film points toward it being fantastic although honestly, does anyone really believe Michelle Williams didn't get pregnant on purpose to trap Heath?

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! It's the shirt hugging icon of doom!

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[identity profile] tallisen.livejournal.com 2005-12-06 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
*fans* Wow, that's really hot!! :)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2005-12-08 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

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