hackthis_archive ([personal profile] hackthis_archive) wrote2004-10-15 03:44 pm

HP - Dearth - TN/NL

For A, who tries to stop me from going out with my bastardization of the English language showing, and for [livejournal.com profile] circe_tigana because, dude, I am *so* warming up.

Theodore Nott/Neville Longbottom


Dearth
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English derthe, from (assumed) Old English dierth, from dEore dear
1 : scarcity that makes dear; specifically : FAMINE
2 : an inadequate supply : LACK




The back of Neville's hand is rubbing against the back of Theodore's hand through two layers of woolen gloves, and there's no justifiable reason for their hands to be brushing against each other in this manner. It's cold out, true, but they're also covered up in several layers of perfectly acceptable clothing. Nevertheless, they’re standing close enough together that Theodore can count the freckles on Neville’s nose and every time one of them breathes the air around them goes white and hazy. There's far more room in this thicket than their proximity would indicate, and yet Theodore can't be bothered to step away and he knows Neville takes his cues from him, so there is that.

Theodore is simply being pragmatic; this is a matter of body heat. It would never do for them to freeze to death a few hundred yards from school.

There's a branch poking Theodore in his upper back, and his fringe is blowing in his eyes again. His hair is just at that length he's so fond of -- just a smidgen too long to be respectable but too short to be seen as unkempt.

He loves winter in Scotland, the way the wind whips through clothing and makes even the palest skin pink with color. He's grown incredibly tired of people looking as though they were dead -- they’ll have plenty of that soon enough, and he plucks off the gold leaves that have fallen on Neville's cloak absently. He can't abide untidiness.

Neville gives him that crooked grin that's made Theodore's heart skip more than once in the last few weeks, and he wonders what Alexandria would say if he were ever to introduce her to Neville Longbottom. Her first remark would most likely have something to do with the cranberries smeared across Neville's mouth like red lipstick or blood, and Theodore actually pauses before leaning in and licking a wet stripe across Neville's lips.

He’s not terribly fond of cranberries, but he did drag Neville away from his dinner, so some concessions will have to be made.

It never occurs to Theodore that this is wrong in any way, because this is what he wants, and that’s all there is to it. What differentiates him from his Slytherin brothers and sisters is that he wants Neville to be his equal, and he’s not ashamed of him as much as he’s wary of either one of them winding up on the wrong end of a wand in the immediate future.

Neville’s gloved hands slip on Theodore’s robes as he tries to pull him closer, and Theodore doesn’t smile as much as he smirks against Neville’s lips.

Neville’s one of the few boys in their year, apart from Ronald Weasley and Blaise, who are actually taller than Theodore, but this doesn’t stop Neville from resting his head on Theodore’s shoulder.

Theodore pats his head awkwardly, and a sigh escapes comes from somewhere very deep that he tries not to visit on these rare occasions.

Theodore cannot continue these assignations with this boy, and yet, he can't bring himself to say good-bye. The dearth of good things in his life right now makes letting Neville go seem like insanity, and Theodore is many things, but he is no one's fool.



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Improv: off, pluck, death, wrong, slip, kiss, crooked, red

ETN: This story now has a series: The Thousandth Man

[identity profile] altiloquent.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Anytime! :o)

Ignore me, I'm just a lurker.

[identity profile] hobbit-feet.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh!

It never occurs to Theodore that this is wrong in any way, because this is what he wants, and that’s all there is to it. What differentiates him from his Slytherin brothers and sisters is that he wants Neville to be his equal, and he’s not ashamed of him as much as he’s wary of either one of them winding up on the wrong end of a wand in the immediate future.(/i>

I love this. It's such a lovely little window into Theodore's mind. This is really pretty gem of fanfiction.

Re: Ignore me, I'm just a lurker.

[identity profile] hobbit-feet.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
My God, can I be a bigger doofus? I meant to say that this is a really pretty gem of fanfiction. And ignored the messed up italics. *grins sheepishly*

[identity profile] karenhealey.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
The dearth of good things in his life right now makes letting Neville go seem like insanity, and Theodore is many things, but he is no one's fool.

No, just his own fool. Oh, this is excellent. I now have Nott!bunnies running around my head, and it's all thanks to you. I love this, Theordore's coolness, Neville's head against his shoulder. The phrase perfectly acceptable clothing. Excellent!

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I one hundred percent agree. H/D is ostentatious and interesting. Theodore/Neville is lowkey and fascinating.

Theodore's rational sounds to me awfully like the opening of a very good story :)

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
:::hugs Circe still she turns blue:::


::loves all over you, messily::

Re: ICONS

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I tried not to spoil myself for 28 Days Later while searching for caps ;)

I did find one of him in Batman Begins, but he looked so creepy in glasses!

Re: ICONS

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
You haven't seen 28 Days Later? OMG! Baby, you have to see it. It has nekid Cillian in it (just ignore the zombie thing) ::fans self::

Re: ICONS

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm dying to see it for the deserted city, but the prospect of zombie monkeys scares me and i don't want to watch it alone.

and whoa, you're using an old icon I made!

cool! I'd forgotten about that one.
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[identity profile] stepps.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
,hdsfkSIJUKwjerhjjasd

Hell.

I thought, when I added this fic to my To Read folder, that it'd end up being one of those really amazing fics that make me want more fics like it with the pairing, and I'd die for them, but never find them, and slowly wither away pining for N/T-ness, as I have in the past with Draco/Remus. OMG, was I right!

Which means that you simply must save all of us that you have made N/T shippers with this one short fic, and write more! :D Especially because Theodore is canon!not-destined-to-be-a-Death-Eater, and therefore deserves exploring more.

Finally, thank you so very, very much!
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[identity profile] belladonnalin.livejournal.com 2004-10-17 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
I think that Theodore Nott is my favorite fic-character.

You people have fecking RUINED me.

It never occurs to Theodore that this is wrong in any way, because this is what he wants, and that’s all there is to it.

HA! And that is why.

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-10-17 12:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful. I felt the cold as I read it and tasted the cranberries.
I love how you've made Theodore a mix of locic and emotion. (and to desire Neville as an equal. wow)

[identity profile] presspause.livejournal.com 2004-10-17 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmhmm, I have a sekrit crush on Theodore Nott, thanks you. :-*

Re: Ignore me, I'm just a lurker.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 10:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much :) I'm so pleased you enjyoed it:)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
LOL. If it makes you feel any better, I am actually working on something right now.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
That's right! Feel the Theodore love!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so pleased you liked this, thanks for reading!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad you liked it:)
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[identity profile] stepps.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that does make me feel 100% better! Rah!

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
most welcome *hug*

[identity profile] evildildo.livejournal.com 2004-10-20 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
i love your work! ::fangirl squeal:: its nice to see something different and very original the world of HP slash. i cant wait to read more.

[identity profile] resmin.livejournal.com 2004-10-25 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
He's not terribly fond of cranberries, but he did drag Neville away from his dinner, so some concessions will have to be made.
I've finally figured out why it is that I'm so fascinated with Theodore (aside from circe and your writing a'course), it's his matter-of-fact nature. He knows that he's on a different side than most people (one which he would not consider 'evil' per say), but he really doesn't see why he can't manipulate *both* sides. A proto-Sark for the Wizard world one might say.

apart from Ronald Weasley and Blaise
Such a small bit, but so perfectly Theodore-ish.

I'm so far behind with the reading and such, but I'm so v glad I bookmarked this. Thanks for sharing the Nott love!

[identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com 2004-11-07 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)


Just beautiful!
I love it!

...and now I am also a Theodore/Neville shipper! XD
*goes to Interests*
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[identity profile] mizbean.livejournal.com 2004-11-11 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
This was a lovely story. One could only hope that JKR fleshes out Nott's character as well as you have.

The way that you convey their relationship in such sad, quiet, longing way is really quite beautiful.

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