hackthis_archive ([personal profile] hackthis_archive) wrote2004-10-15 03:44 pm

HP - Dearth - TN/NL

For A, who tries to stop me from going out with my bastardization of the English language showing, and for [livejournal.com profile] circe_tigana because, dude, I am *so* warming up.

Theodore Nott/Neville Longbottom


Dearth
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English derthe, from (assumed) Old English dierth, from dEore dear
1 : scarcity that makes dear; specifically : FAMINE
2 : an inadequate supply : LACK




The back of Neville's hand is rubbing against the back of Theodore's hand through two layers of woolen gloves, and there's no justifiable reason for their hands to be brushing against each other in this manner. It's cold out, true, but they're also covered up in several layers of perfectly acceptable clothing. Nevertheless, they’re standing close enough together that Theodore can count the freckles on Neville’s nose and every time one of them breathes the air around them goes white and hazy. There's far more room in this thicket than their proximity would indicate, and yet Theodore can't be bothered to step away and he knows Neville takes his cues from him, so there is that.

Theodore is simply being pragmatic; this is a matter of body heat. It would never do for them to freeze to death a few hundred yards from school.

There's a branch poking Theodore in his upper back, and his fringe is blowing in his eyes again. His hair is just at that length he's so fond of -- just a smidgen too long to be respectable but too short to be seen as unkempt.

He loves winter in Scotland, the way the wind whips through clothing and makes even the palest skin pink with color. He's grown incredibly tired of people looking as though they were dead -- they’ll have plenty of that soon enough, and he plucks off the gold leaves that have fallen on Neville's cloak absently. He can't abide untidiness.

Neville gives him that crooked grin that's made Theodore's heart skip more than once in the last few weeks, and he wonders what Alexandria would say if he were ever to introduce her to Neville Longbottom. Her first remark would most likely have something to do with the cranberries smeared across Neville's mouth like red lipstick or blood, and Theodore actually pauses before leaning in and licking a wet stripe across Neville's lips.

He’s not terribly fond of cranberries, but he did drag Neville away from his dinner, so some concessions will have to be made.

It never occurs to Theodore that this is wrong in any way, because this is what he wants, and that’s all there is to it. What differentiates him from his Slytherin brothers and sisters is that he wants Neville to be his equal, and he’s not ashamed of him as much as he’s wary of either one of them winding up on the wrong end of a wand in the immediate future.

Neville’s gloved hands slip on Theodore’s robes as he tries to pull him closer, and Theodore doesn’t smile as much as he smirks against Neville’s lips.

Neville’s one of the few boys in their year, apart from Ronald Weasley and Blaise, who are actually taller than Theodore, but this doesn’t stop Neville from resting his head on Theodore’s shoulder.

Theodore pats his head awkwardly, and a sigh escapes comes from somewhere very deep that he tries not to visit on these rare occasions.

Theodore cannot continue these assignations with this boy, and yet, he can't bring himself to say good-bye. The dearth of good things in his life right now makes letting Neville go seem like insanity, and Theodore is many things, but he is no one's fool.



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Improv: off, pluck, death, wrong, slip, kiss, crooked, red

ETN: This story now has a series: The Thousandth Man

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes.

He's grown incredible tired of people looking as though they were dead, they’ll have plenty of that soon enough, and he plucks off the gold leaves that have fallen on Neville's cloak absently -- he can't abide untidiness.

::flies to wherever the hell you live and makes out with you then sits on your knee to warm you up further::

Just right, dude.

the sigh that escapes come from somewhere very deep that he tries not to visit on these rare occasions.

I am replete.

small typo: he wants Neville to be in equal

I need to make myself a Nott icon.

[identity profile] smonsterbite.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Theodore cannot continue these assignations with this boy, and yet, he can't bring himself to say good-bye. The dearth of good things in his life right now makes letting Neville go seem like insanity, and Theodore is many things, but he is no one's fool.

I have a strange affinity for the word "assignation". It's slightly naughty, in a very proper way. I wanna have one.

*ahem*

Anyway, this drabble is a bit like a Scottish winter - bare, and coldly clean, and bracing. If that makes sense, which it may possibly only to me.

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

Oh. Oh oh oh. There are good things in store for us. Yes.

This is a very good thing.

I'm a tad sleepy, so I'm even less eloquent than usual just now, but. Eeeeeee!

*happy sigh*

[identity profile] 142978.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
It never occurs to Theodore that this is wrong in any way, because this is what he wants, and that’s all there is to it.

Mm. Epitome of Slytherin. I love it.

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
mmmm... absolutely lovely.
I adore your piece because not only does it has a beautiful Neville, it has this He’s not terribly fond of cranberries, but he did drag Neville away from his dinner, so some concessions will have to be made.
le sigh.

ICONS

[identity profile] circe-tigana.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)




celli: a woman and a man holding hands, captioned "i treasure" (words)

[personal profile] celli 2004-10-15 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Cool.

[identity profile] altiloquent.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
alsdklkjliaskdl;jk;laks lkasd;kljajshdlkjasd

There are no words for how much I love this. I love this. I do I do I do. So much character and charm and sweet and GUH. I cna die now. Thank you for this.

[identity profile] silentfire.livejournal.com 2004-10-15 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, this is simply lovely. absolutely perfect! a spot of warmth on a cold day.

[identity profile] leakypen.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
hello,
i made my way here through [livejournal.com profile] silver_and_gold, found this, you, and it's all just wonderful.

Theodore Nott's character has been so intriguing after Rowling spilled the story on him, and i don't particularly know (or care) if you're going on what she said, but the Nott has just pulled me in even more.

and Neville too (though...he's always been appealing).

you write beautifully.
i just wanted to tell you that :)

[identity profile] teaspoon.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 09:52 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, I'm not even a big Neville fangirl (though I do love him dearly) and this still made my jaw hang open. Your writing is just... Particularly stunninng in this piece, although it generally is of a very high-calibre. Congratulations; you've really got something with this Nott boy. :)

Re: ICONS

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
OMGWTFYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3333333

*loves all over Circe*

Look at the precious!

It's all mine!mine!mine!

[identity profile] atiakay.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful.

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Look at my prettiest icons in the whole, wide world! :::hugs Circe still she turns blue:::

small typo: he wants Neville to be in equal

It's not one of my stories without at least one typo ;)

::pets icon::

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, I almost forgot to tell you, I have this whole thing in my head about how Theodore/Neville is way better (to me) than H/D because while H/D is more epic, they're almost to the point of mockery, while T/N is much quieter and protective.

Let me put it like this (to sum up how Theodore made me a believer):

If you've got 10 people in a room, who should you really be concerned about? The five that are talking non-stop about themselves, the four that are just trying to make conversation, or the one in the corner who's not saying anything at all? Theodore may be quiet and reserved, but so is Neville and it's always the quiet ones that surprise you with the depth of their feelings in the end.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude, isn't 'assignation' like one of the hottest words ever? You just immediately think of sex and stealth and people hiding away and being all tawdry.

Anyway, this drabble is a bit like a Scottish winter - bare, and coldly clean, and bracing. If that makes sense, which it may possibly only to me.

Dude, have I experienced the Scottish winter, it makes perfect sense to me.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I was just hollering and jumping and down and slovering all over [livejournal.com profile] circe_tigana and babbling why OMGTheodore/Neville = theirloveissolowkeyandearthshattering!

She made me icons, it made me kind of excitable.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
It's why I love him, really. He's a good Slyherin, but he's just got enough Ravenclaw blood to make him have sense, which you know, is not necessarily something most Slytherins have.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, Neville/Theodore = the pairing of manners.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you :)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
You are very kind, thank you for all your lovely comments. :) I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this so much.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I like to think I've found something pretty special with Theodore, but time will tell of course. I'm very pleased you enjoyed this, thank you for all your kind comments.

[identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com 2004-10-16 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :)

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