Date: 2003-06-20 09:20 am (UTC)
I loved the exposition here; slow enough to build up the tension, but fast enough that it doesn't drag. The Bobby characterization in particular was spot-on -- great work!

What lovely feedback, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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