oh so cute! Seth is too adorable when he rubs his nose with his fist. I love Ryan's justification, the way that he's a little unsure at the end.
I also like seeing this from Ryan's POV, which is rare in this still young fandom. I still find him hard to pin down, because he tries so hard to mold himself into what everyone wants him to be.
Love your writing as usual. Wistful with a touch of humor, tactile details told in a lean way that evokes emotion.
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Date: 2003-11-07 03:56 pm (UTC)I also like seeing this from Ryan's POV, which is rare in this still young fandom. I still find him hard to pin down, because he tries so hard to mold himself into what everyone wants him to be.
Love your writing as usual. Wistful with a touch of humor, tactile details told in a lean way that evokes emotion.