I am horribly fascinated with H/D fluff
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hackthis_archiveSmallville cracked me up. It's the same sorry-ass tripe I've come to expect so really, I kinda liked it. Brownie points for Falling Down!Lex.
No comic books this week though, boo.
Have I told y’all about my Everwood love? It runs deep. Seriously, I heart this show. I watch it twice a week without fail. Also, I want Everwood slash now, damnit! What? You know Dehlia is going to bring Bright and Ephram together, don’t even fake on this, man!
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Contract I: The Agreement
Contract II: The Rules
The Loophole
“Not on the mouth.”
Potter’s face looms like the on-coming war, only much more welcome. Red, puffy lips parted to show white teeth. Eyes glazed behind crooked spectacles, which are balanced on a quasi-Roman nose. Potter is attractive; it almost pains Draco to think it, or it would pain him if Draco weren’t shagging him. If Draco weren’t pressed against the wall of the broom shed, with Potter’s knee pressed between his legs, he might have issues.
But he doesn’t.
“Why not?”
If Draco flicked out his tongue, he could lick Potter’s chin. If Potter flicked out his tongue, he would lick Draco’s nose. Draco is a bit obsessed in relation to Potter’s tongue: it’s very long and very wet. On occasion he dreams about sucking on it, but he’s already broken the rules once and it doesn’t need to happen again.
No sucking on Potter’s tongue. No calling Potter by his first name. No whimpering unless absolutely necessary. Keep the post-shagging fondling/cuddling to a minimum, and no kissing on the mouth.
Draco has to listen to the rules. He will *not* get waylaid by Potter’s eyes looking down when he wets his lips. Draco's lips are very dry; he can’t help it. If he he kisses Potter, his lips will only get drier. They'll get cracked. It will probably hurt.
Not that Draco minds a bit of pain.
“Because.”
Potter should not be repositioning his head. There should be no tilting. If Draco reaches up and grabs hold of that mass of hair, he’ll have better control.
It’s always about control
“That’s not a proper answer.”
Draco thinks that the problem comes when he tries to be clever: he’s found that it doesn’t work. He can’t deliberately make himself clever. He can *be* clever, he just can’t *make* it happen.
At least not in regards to Potter.
Not when Potter keeps brushing his lips against Draco’s mouth and seeking entrance with a whisper of his very wet tongue. Draco has resolve. He can withstand this assault. He is not going to give in when Potter nuzzles his jaw line and nips at his earlobe.
Draco generally performs on demand much better.
“So.”
If Draco were clever in relation to Harry Potter then he would change the rules. He would look for the loophole. Every agreement has one. Every contract has its clauses, its portkeys of escape in the event of an emergency. In the event that their creator gets trapped against the broom shed with a very horny Gryffindor rubbing against him like friction has just been discovered by the Ministry.
“I think you’re protesting a bit too much.”
If Draco were smart, he would see the loophole. He would allow Potter to kiss *him* - there's no rule against *that*.
If Draco were smarter, he would turn his head towards Potter instead of away. Draco would lift his chin slightly, and defiantly dare Potter to prove his point. The loophole provides Draco with quite a bit of room to manoeuver. He can thrust his hips against Potter and pull him that inch closer that doesn’t even exist. They’re already *very* close.
Of course that would only take place if Draco was smart, but he’s not smart. He’s brilliant.
It’s not the same when he’s not initiating it.
“I don’t care what you think.”
Draco is brilliant, and Potter is clever. He must be because his mouth is hovering right over Draco’s now, and Draco can only stare. Potter is so close, Draco can’t even see his glasses; he only sees enormous glittering dilated pupils.
Draco is in grave danger of going cross-eyed.
The Muggles call it hypnotism. Draco calls it the loophole. Potter’s mouth is like a loophole closing over Draco, and he doesn’t really care. Not with Potter’s hands fisting in his robes, and Draco’s mouth so intent on getting reacquainted with Potter’s tongue. His last encounter with Potter's mouth was memorable, but it was only *one* memory. Draco wants more. More tongue, more lip, more teeth, more memories, more kisses.
He's obviously lost the plot.
He doesn't really care.
When Draco finally pulls Potter’s mouth away, there’s the tearing of hair. It might be his, caught by the recalcitrant broom shed; it might be Potter’s, from his fingers. There is also panting. It’s not coming from Potter.
“Yes, you do.”
No comic books this week though, boo.
Have I told y’all about my Everwood love? It runs deep. Seriously, I heart this show. I watch it twice a week without fail. Also, I want Everwood slash now, damnit! What? You know Dehlia is going to bring Bright and Ephram together, don’t even fake on this, man!
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Contract I: The Agreement
Contract II: The Rules
The Loophole
“Not on the mouth.”
Potter’s face looms like the on-coming war, only much more welcome. Red, puffy lips parted to show white teeth. Eyes glazed behind crooked spectacles, which are balanced on a quasi-Roman nose. Potter is attractive; it almost pains Draco to think it, or it would pain him if Draco weren’t shagging him. If Draco weren’t pressed against the wall of the broom shed, with Potter’s knee pressed between his legs, he might have issues.
But he doesn’t.
“Why not?”
If Draco flicked out his tongue, he could lick Potter’s chin. If Potter flicked out his tongue, he would lick Draco’s nose. Draco is a bit obsessed in relation to Potter’s tongue: it’s very long and very wet. On occasion he dreams about sucking on it, but he’s already broken the rules once and it doesn’t need to happen again.
No sucking on Potter’s tongue. No calling Potter by his first name. No whimpering unless absolutely necessary. Keep the post-shagging fondling/cuddling to a minimum, and no kissing on the mouth.
Draco has to listen to the rules. He will *not* get waylaid by Potter’s eyes looking down when he wets his lips. Draco's lips are very dry; he can’t help it. If he he kisses Potter, his lips will only get drier. They'll get cracked. It will probably hurt.
Not that Draco minds a bit of pain.
“Because.”
Potter should not be repositioning his head. There should be no tilting. If Draco reaches up and grabs hold of that mass of hair, he’ll have better control.
It’s always about control
“That’s not a proper answer.”
Draco thinks that the problem comes when he tries to be clever: he’s found that it doesn’t work. He can’t deliberately make himself clever. He can *be* clever, he just can’t *make* it happen.
At least not in regards to Potter.
Not when Potter keeps brushing his lips against Draco’s mouth and seeking entrance with a whisper of his very wet tongue. Draco has resolve. He can withstand this assault. He is not going to give in when Potter nuzzles his jaw line and nips at his earlobe.
Draco generally performs on demand much better.
“So.”
If Draco were clever in relation to Harry Potter then he would change the rules. He would look for the loophole. Every agreement has one. Every contract has its clauses, its portkeys of escape in the event of an emergency. In the event that their creator gets trapped against the broom shed with a very horny Gryffindor rubbing against him like friction has just been discovered by the Ministry.
“I think you’re protesting a bit too much.”
If Draco were smart, he would see the loophole. He would allow Potter to kiss *him* - there's no rule against *that*.
If Draco were smarter, he would turn his head towards Potter instead of away. Draco would lift his chin slightly, and defiantly dare Potter to prove his point. The loophole provides Draco with quite a bit of room to manoeuver. He can thrust his hips against Potter and pull him that inch closer that doesn’t even exist. They’re already *very* close.
Of course that would only take place if Draco was smart, but he’s not smart. He’s brilliant.
It’s not the same when he’s not initiating it.
“I don’t care what you think.”
Draco is brilliant, and Potter is clever. He must be because his mouth is hovering right over Draco’s now, and Draco can only stare. Potter is so close, Draco can’t even see his glasses; he only sees enormous glittering dilated pupils.
Draco is in grave danger of going cross-eyed.
The Muggles call it hypnotism. Draco calls it the loophole. Potter’s mouth is like a loophole closing over Draco, and he doesn’t really care. Not with Potter’s hands fisting in his robes, and Draco’s mouth so intent on getting reacquainted with Potter’s tongue. His last encounter with Potter's mouth was memorable, but it was only *one* memory. Draco wants more. More tongue, more lip, more teeth, more memories, more kisses.
He's obviously lost the plot.
He doesn't really care.
When Draco finally pulls Potter’s mouth away, there’s the tearing of hair. It might be his, caught by the recalcitrant broom shed; it might be Potter’s, from his fingers. There is also panting. It’s not coming from Potter.
“Yes, you do.”
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Date: 2002-11-20 07:19 am (UTC)Send me a mail with some HP goading. Oh, I have the other thing to do, Rabbit's gonna kill me. Well, still send the HP ideas.
This week is turning into a fucking corker. (get IM on your home comp before I beat you to death with your own arm)
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Date: 2002-11-20 09:27 am (UTC)Yes I am, look out your window ::waves::
Umm, yes, I agree. You need to get IM, because as it is now, I feel like I'm not talking to you enough. and you don't want me to get all crazy on your ass.
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Date: 2002-11-20 11:47 am (UTC)Send me an e-mail, tell me all about it. Maybe I'll get to read it before I put my fist through the monitor.
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Date: 2002-11-20 07:53 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2002-11-20 11:48 am (UTC)What a lovely sentiment. Well, I think it's lovely at any rate. I'm glad you liked it.
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Date: 2002-11-20 09:29 am (UTC)Draco=pushy bottom.
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Date: 2002-11-20 11:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2002-11-20 01:43 pm (UTC)there's just something unmistakable lovely about this set.
i think it might be my favorite of yours... of your hp stuffs most definitely.
i just... wow... it makes me kinda mushy and floaty and lost...
i just find them and the emotion and the lines to be so spot on i could cry.
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.
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Date: 2002-11-20 04:34 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2002-11-20 04:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2002-11-21 01:50 am (UTC)you do know how i -adore- this draco, this set, your writing, and fluffy!snarky!in-denial!h/d, right? oh -gahd- it's almost -too much-, it's just -killing- me with um. fluffy goodness :D
hee! hee! and like, you manage to make it all sexy, too. w00t!
gahd, seriously, it's embarrassing, how my brain just turns to mush and i can't really say anything vaguely intelligent and can only grunt in piggy appreciation :D
am so glad he's going to get -more- in denial. that should be fun :D
there's like, something deeply wrong with me that this is my favorite sort of draco, isn't it?? ahahah. i'm apparently not one for working hard for my kicks, after all~:) if kissing!denial were draco's deepest issue i'd be SUCH the happy camper, ahahahah.
and he's so easy, too :D it's adorable. poor, sex-crazed bunny who can't really say no and can't even pretend very well anymore. hee~! my loff knows no bounds~:)
on the bright side, you're continuing a hallowed hollywood tradition called a sex comedy. or something like that :D ahahaha
this draco reminds me of a fanged, chibi version of himself, who growls cutely, and pouts cutely, and whines cutely, and pulls on harry's leg, going, "sex! now!" cutely :D hee.
it just doesn't get any better than that, in my head, anyway :D obviously, no one should listen to me ><;;
~reena
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Date: 2002-11-21 11:40 am (UTC)gahd, seriously, it's embarrassing, how my brain just turns to mush and i can't really say anything vaguely intelligent and can only grunt in piggy appreciation :
LMFAO. Yeah, that's pretty much my reaction too, every time I think I should create something like a plot, or at least a point, Draco points out that sex has lots of points and then I fall over laughing and get off track. He's evil like that.
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Date: 2002-11-23 06:18 pm (UTC)Normally, I'd say that you're such a tease, you know, for being so damn close to smut here that I keep waiting for "and then they get naked" to be the next line. But the way you write this, the hesitance and how we're just right there, in the moment, and it's at this level of intensity that makes it just as satisfying as smut. It's like really, really hot foreplay, but not even that, because foreplay is building to something and this feels complete. You just say so much about this perfect moment that I feel like that's all I need, just to feel the moment with them, because damn, what a moment.
And did I mention that it's really, really hot?
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Date: 2002-11-23 07:53 pm (UTC)