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I have been working on something incessantly for the last twelve hours. This ain't it.

Their love is so tragic. Written for Jess's 100-Word Challenge

10 Feet to Die By


“You can’t just leave, Lex.”

Ten feet to the front door

“It’s called walking away, Clark.”

Nine.

“I love you.”

Eight.

“That’s emotional blackmail.”

Seven.

“I learned from the best.”

Six.

“Clark.”

Five.

“Stay.”

Four.

“Why?”

Three.

“It’s your penthouse.”

Two.

“It’s your home.”

One and a half.

“No, it’s not. It never has been.”

One.

“Then why did you stay?”

Two-thirds.

“You were here. There’s no point in me being here if you’re not.”

One half.

“So I should just stay here? With you?”

No space left.

“That’s what I was trying to say in the first place.”

Date: 2003-03-06 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barely-bean.livejournal.com
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *squees* I love this challenge.

Date: 2003-03-06 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devin-chain.livejournal.com
Even knowing it's a make up fic, my heart was pounding out of my chest. Scary countdown. Waaaaaay effective. Bravo!

Date: 2003-03-06 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r1cepudding.livejournal.com
*squeeb*

You rock so hard.

Date: 2003-03-06 11:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ingridmatthews.livejournal.com
Yes! Scary, but with a happy ending. *wibble*

Date: 2003-03-06 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xnitelite.livejournal.com
It's like watching a magician, the way you work with limited words and space. Someday, I will find out how you do that.

Date: 2003-03-06 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-marcasit.livejournal.com
I felt drawn in at the same time they were drawn together. Just outstanding!

Date: 2003-03-06 01:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] yavannauk.livejournal.com
Great story, cleverly written. Wow!

Date: 2003-03-06 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyclogenesis.livejournal.com
*sniff* <33333333. Is just so sweet. I'm incoherent in the face of the great eternal unbreakable love.

*loves*

Date: 2003-03-06 02:05 pm (UTC)
ext_1770: @ _jems_ (Declines)
From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
So clever - you had me hanging on the edge of my seat for those 100 words. You even paced the words out for as long as possible. OK, I knew it was make-up fic, but I still worry with these boys!

Date: 2003-03-06 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhiannonhero.livejournal.com
awwww. this was just terrific.

Date: 2003-03-06 03:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dameange.livejournal.com
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww {{{hugs}}}} love this, zahra! thank you!

Date: 2003-03-06 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arysteia.livejournal.com
I skipped a line by mistake and thought it ended badly! Aaaargh. I thought you were pulling the meanest trick *ever*, sneaking in a break up among all the makeups. Oh the trauma. But I should have had faith. Well done, as always.

Date: 2003-03-06 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aelita.livejournal.com
Ouch and aww and you managed to reduce me to a sniffing fool with no decent vocabulary again.

Date: 2003-03-06 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dammitcarl.livejournal.com
what you do with so few words, zahra. beautiful.

Date: 2003-03-06 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ethrosdemon.livejournal.com
I really love the form of this. Even if the substance makes me PUKE.

lalalala

Date: 2003-03-07 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alee-gothphyle.livejournal.com
wow! scary and perfect. Thanks!

Date: 2003-03-07 03:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mos-self.livejournal.com
you had me on the edge of the seat. loved it!

Date: 2003-03-07 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lexcorp-hope.livejournal.com
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, this is perfect, and it hurts, and then it kisses it and makes it all better. You are so brilliant, baby girl!

Date: 2003-03-14 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com
*dies everywhere* you. are evil.

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